Tuesday, July 8, 2008

Daily Design No. 4


I need your feedback!
This is a possible title slide for the newest sermon series at church. It's a look at God's incredible power vs. life's impossible circumstances. We were going for an Ultimate Fighting Championship look without completely endorsing that sport.
What do you think?

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

sweet run it
anonymous senior higher at NMC

Anonymous said...

i am completely unfamiliar with ultimate fight whatever so if my comments are way off, definitely disregard ... as a designer, however, i'm intrigued with why you chose to italicize the words. to me it comes off as laid back, but could also represent movement i guess. i'd almost like to see it more of a vertically scaled font or something that's tighter together kerning/tracking/whatever. it seems pretty light and airy as it is, as far as typography is concerned. i'm intrigued by the hand image -- is it dirty or a dark-skinned person? i find myself concentrating on just how wrinkly it looks ... !

Lynette said...

I like it. Similar to Rachel, I tend to not be an italic, sans serif kinda gal, but I think it's okay in this instance.